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Mazz · Registered User Joined: 05 Sep 2005 Posts: 5

There are a few things I have done.
Critique is fine but please no saying anything like "this sucks" if it does tell me why, what can i do to improve.
and so on.

Paladin · Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2005 11:35 pm Post subject:

What can I say, except for perhaps, I like it!

BTW, you can't have my coffee! But I'll brew more if it keeps ya drawing! Very Happy

Nitch · Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2005 11:55 pm Post subject:

I like you're style in the second one, though the tail seems far too short.

Mazz · Registered User Joined: 05 Sep 2005 Posts: 5

yes, i will keep drawing for coffee.

In the second one she is a mix between an african wild dog and some other creature with a short tail, so her tail is supose to be short.

Kehaar · Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 11:44 pm Post subject:

The first one, I'd put her thumb a tad lower on her hand.
have some caw-fee Cool

Mazz · Registered User Joined: 05 Sep 2005 Posts: 5

lol actually that one is a guy, but him being in a skirt and me not mentioning he is, I guess he does look like a girl.

No it's not a fetish! ok it is.

thankyou, I have to work on my hands and the placement and size of fingers and that was very helpful. *takes coffee and gives hugs* Very Happy

Kehaar · Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 11:39 pm Post subject:

Oh, I'm so sorry I thought he was a girl! Shocked

Looking at your own hands helps, take special notice that the fingers are different lengths and the limits of how far your own joints can bend.

Mazz · Registered User Joined: 05 Sep 2005 Posts: 5

it's ok people tend to think my fursona is a guy.

I'll try that thankyou.

Sigurd Volsung · Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 7:38 am Post subject:

You may also want to try your paw at shading the underside of adam's tail it could use some blues to give it some volume.

Mazz · Registered User Joined: 05 Sep 2005 Posts: 5

thankyou i'll try that too next time.