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Scarlet Blackpaw
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| Aslaug wrote: | | *grins* Naahh...T2 is just short for Transitions 2. |
That's what I figured, I just couldn't pass up the oppertunity for punning.
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| Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 2:54 pm Post subject: |
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A slight oops in the latest chapter....
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Esteban pushed open the door to Jean's room and entered. He smiled and looked at the bed. The vixen was awake, reading a newspaper. She didn't seem to notice anyone arriving. Esteban noted she looked quite content. The wolf looked over his shoulder and put a finger to his lips, signaling to Malcolm and Timothy to be quiet. Then he very carefully pushed the door open and tiptoed inside
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First Esteban pushes the door open and enters, then he pushes it open and tiptoes inside?
I hope he didn't slam the door when he exited the room and closed the door... 
Oh, and what Jean wanted to ask the priest...
Well, she is Jean, so I shouldn't have been so surprised 
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| Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 3:13 pm Post subject: |
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YIKES! How the bleedin' hell did I miss that one. I should've said "pushed it all the way open" the second time.
Fixing now, will ask Fikrann to upload the new version the next time I see her |
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| Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 9:36 pm Post subject: |
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Isn't it amazing how easily those little things can bite you in the butt--- 
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| Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 11:25 pm Post subject: |
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Kinda like a horse fly 
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| Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 12:39 am Post subject: |
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Good chapter.
Too bad you stopped Jean's discussion with the priest just when it began to get interesting...
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I did consider writing more on it, but I decided against it.
There are readers out there who take any critical questions directed at a priest as an attack on their beliefs and I thought it best to try to keep things relatively neutral. |
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| Styx wrote: | | Kinda like a horse fly |
OUCH-OUCH-OUCH!!!
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I think I found another goof
| Quote: | | I've been to a convention in Los Angeles and we've shot a movie in Virginia. |
Wasn't the con in San Fransico?
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You know what? I must've had my head jammed in the door for half an hour. Yes. Thank you. Gods damned it, I hate it when there are that many goofs. I'll fix that and ask poor, overworked Fikrann to fix it -again- *gahh*
She's probably not on until tomorrow though. |
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| Aslaug wrote: | | Gods damned it, I hate it when there are that many goofs. |
Oh! OH!! The world's gonna end NOW!!!
A TYPO has been spotted, and things will never be the same---!
Sorry.
All writers live with 'em, and despite our best efforts, they DO slip by our editors. WHAT?!?! Your publisher doesn't employ EDITORS and PROOFREADERS?!?! Horrors! How will the poor readers stand it?!?!
Actually...quite well, thanks. We like the story, we understand the process by which we're receiving it.
Typos, while an annoyance, "happen"---just like other annoyances in life.
We love you anyway, Ms. Aslaug, and your stories, too.
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Awww...shucks...dey wuv me...  |
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Of corse we do, how could you doubt it
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Ok everyone...group hug the filly! she is feeling underloved.
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| Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 4:29 pm Post subject: |
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| Aslaug wrote: | | Awww...shucks...dey wuv me... |
You better believe it.
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