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PostPosted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 7:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

AmigaDragon wrote:
Yes, I assumed that the facilty would have their own surveilance system. But the way you mentioned the camera(s), I thought they were secretly added by someone other than the staff.


I point them out because people do incredibly stupid things in front of security cameras. They just don't think about the fact that they're there.

Of course, that's not to say I won't do something even MORE sinister with them.... BUWAHAHahahahahaha Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 8:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Amanda took another deep breath and slowly let it out. This was a twist she hadn’t anticipated and that annoyed her. Up until now, Sheila had been easily manipulated, allowing her to control the flow of emotions. Somehow, the vixen had managed to break that carefully wrought chain without even realizing she had done it.

Yes, this was definitely going to complicate things.


The "good" doctor had been manipulating Sheila's emotions. Why? And why wasn't Sheila getting better? She did get a little better with Amanda initialy but then she hit a brick wall, especially when her supposed captor was released and she saw the news report, if you ask me someone made sure she'd see the report. And yes it may be another worker there but it'd would have to be someone at the top end of the chain. And I doubt that it's a fellow patient.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 9:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

But remember, as far as everyone else (except the jackal and ZigZag) is concerned, the route to healing would involve disbelieving (or forgetting) memories of her "fantasy" journey with Arden and dealing with her "abduction" memories, not disbelieving the abduction and dealing with the journey. The former is what both Dr.s were working for, whether they had a secret motive or not.
I'm not saying that it can't be Amanda, just that it could still be someone else applying subtle pressure for the jackal.

Now, as far as the kits and the duration of her absence are concerned, I've been wondering if some of the other worlds were running at a slower time rate than this one. Or if the bear half would increase the gestation time (yeah, feral polar bears are no more than 8 months, but then feral fox are under 2 months), or maybe there's influence for this increase from "the dragon" (remember Sheila noticed the eyes in the hospital and Anatol's comment about the kits during his trip south of the border).

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 11:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey Hikaru - when's the next one comming? (you have yet to post something telling us that it'll be delayed...)
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 10:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Check his pseudo blog RL is being a pain for the bear lately.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 12:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A pain doesn't begin to describe it.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 9:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well... no but this *is* supposed to be a PG-13 forum Wink
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 6:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey - long time no siege - well ok, only a couple of days...

but I still must have a story-progresion update!

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 8:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Right now, I'm just mellowing out and letting my brain de-flate.

I'll probably be posting a new chapter after MFM in Sept if not before then.

Cheers.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 11:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

w00t - cant wait!
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

webkilla wrote:
w00t - cant wait!


Sure you can.

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