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Suprise! Poetry by me. Warning it could be rather depresing

 
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Henry_Hound
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 6:28 am    Post subject: Suprise! Poetry by me. Warning it could be rather depresing Reply with quote

Waste of Time

My girlfriend says we need to talk
She says that our relationship is a waste of time
Three years down the drain
Anniversaries for naught
Birthdays for less
But where does the waste stop
Was my four years of high school a waste
If not high school how about grade school
There must be more waste than just three years
What about my Vo-tech course
Was one year too much
But surely that is not it
No there must be more
But when did the waste start
Did it start when I turned three
Or when I climbed my first tree
No it must have started sooner than that
Twenty one years to be more precise
It started when I was born.

I wrote that one when I was a bit depressed and was going through a rocky spot with my fiancee.
The next one has no name other than what I saved it as:

Poem of Hate

EYES SO BEAUTIFUL A BROWN
BUT WHEN THEY TURN TO GOLD
I RUN FOR HIGHER GROUNG
FOR I AM NOT THAT BOLD

WHEN YOU ARE CALM I AM HAPPY
BUT IF YOU ARE MAD I AM SQUAKKY
INSTEAD OF CALMING YOU I AGRIVATE
WHICH TENDS TO MAKE YOU AGITATE

WHEN YOU WANT TO KILL I WANT TO RUN
BUT YOU GET MADDER AT MY SELF PRESERVATION
WHEN YOU'RE MAD I HOPE YOU NEVER GET A GUN
OR I'D HAVE TO HIDE IN A PLACE OF RESERVATION

I DRAW A LINE AND YOU CROSS IT
IS IT WRONG TO REDRAW IT
OR SHOULD I STAY AND GET MUTALATED
WHILE YOU GET MORE AGITATED

WHY DO I HAVE TO AGITATE
I HAVE NO WAY TO KNOW
BUT MAYBE BECAUSE YOU AGRIVATE
YOU MAY HAVE THE KEY NO?

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PrincessB
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 6:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quite intreaging, specially liked the first one... Just becareful at the power of your words, my ex-fiancee still bashes me through his online poetry. Been a while since he added new ones but the angry poems are still out there for everyone to see... Pain can be a great writing tool just watch were you swing your sword. ((huggs))
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 11:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow Haven't checked this thread in a long time. Yea anger can be a dangerous tool and a double edged sword. As I said those were writen some time ago when we were having problems, but hey we're still together. Smile
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