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Kit Fox
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He He, my first post + topic *pats self on back* 
Well I've been reading your story for some time now and i was wondering what happened to the rest of act 2? it seems like there should be more, but you just leave it hanging. I dont know if something like this has already been made here, so please dont flame me on this one.
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Kit Fox
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thank you for clearing that up, i started to read act 3 last night, but didnt really have enought time to get to far with it. hopefully ill be able to read more after work today.
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As with all cliff hangers, it left you with Arden being dead... In fact, our hero remained dead for quite some time until Sheila (the most reluctant AND pissed off heroine) had to bring him back.
Unfortunately, the dream sequence at the beginning of Act III didn't quite make that clear to the readers.
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Kit Fox
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yup, I understand now, i didnt get to far last night with my reading, but i got the gist of it this afternoon. thanks for your help.
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| Kit Fox wrote: | | thank you for clearing that up, i started to read act 3 last night, but didnt really have enought time to get to far with it. hopefully ill be able to read more after work today. |
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Kit Fox
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So what, simple mistaken wording 
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| hikaru wrote: | As with all cliff hangers, it left you with Arden being dead... In fact, our hero remained dead for quite some time until Sheila (the most reluctant AND pissed off heroine) had to bring him back.
Unfortunately, the dream sequence at the beginning of Act III didn't quite make that clear to the readers.
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I'm still not quite sure if I read it all - I just recently found this site and started reading, and what LOOKS like the end of act II has both of Our Heroes in the middle of a fight with the exit gate having just whiffed out of sight. Is that the end, or am I missing something?
Meanwhile, I shall start reading Act III and expect a major flashback someplace, to explain how Sheila got her groove... er... body back.
BTW - what's the first chapter of anything you posted in 2005? I'd like to recommend Identity Crisis to the Recommended Anthropomorphics List for this year.
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| Anansii wrote: | | I'm still not quite sure if I read it all - I just recently found this site and started reading, and what LOOKS like the end of act II has both of Our Heroes in the middle of a fight with the exit gate having just whiffed out of sight. Is that the end, or am I missing something? |
Nope. That's the end of Act II. I ended the act with a cliff hanger.
| Anansii wrote: | Meanwhile, I shall start reading Act III and expect a major flashback someplace, to explain how Sheila got her groove... er... body back.
BTW - what's the first chapter of anything you posted in 2005? I'd like to recommend Identity Crisis to the Recommended Anthropomorphics List for this year. |
Act III, Chapter 15 was the first chapter for this year.
Be aware that I'm on a writing hiatus at the moment. After having worked on this story for 5 years (and some current personal issues), I'm a bit burned out and am taking another break from writing.
I'll probably start back up after MFM in September, assuming I manage to go.
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don worry later on in the story A LARGE AMOUNT of things get explained and it all ties together... im on chapter 13 of a4 and for sum reason my brain wont let me read the rest. STUPID BRAIN *slams head on desk*
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