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The Unamed Tale

 
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2005 9:42 pm    Post subject: The Unamed Tale Reply with quote

Well cence its too late to start a chapter by chapter post heres the discussion about the story.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 12:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok, I just read it. It was a little confusing to read with some missing punctuation (mostly commas I think) and some typos (lots of "threw"s that should have been "through", among others). At the end, I was getting confused as to when things were happening (is that "now", 10 years ago or 10 years from now?).

Starting on Blue Flames now.

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