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Shoobie · Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 12:16 pm Post subject: Short for Review

It's not often that I write a short story. My interests in my current major story (ThorHammer) and in writing articles for the universe around it, seem to suck up most of my creative time and energies.

I figured that, since I'm now here, maybe I should pick back through some of my "forgotten" junk and see what turns up.

I wrote this piece called “Stolen Property” over a year ago, while in college, when my fiction instructor requested that we write a short story. Since my mind is focused on little else when it comes to fiction, I wrote a “hunt” style short story involving my main character (Redhawk) and some other...shtuff. Confused

I haven’t really re-read it since, though I did just finish re-formatting it to be more in-line with the way I present chapters of ThorHammer, and converted it to a PDF for easy reading.

I thought maybe someone would like to have a gander at it and see what they think? If this isn’t the right place to put up shorts for critiquing, let me know. Shocked

Here’s the link: http://www.furlisophical.net/archive/shorts/short_stlprop.pdf

Shoobie · Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2005 1:58 pm Post subject:

No takers, huh? *sad* ^..^

Shadu · Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 7:18 pm Post subject:

Hey i read it. i thought it was fun! though i read it when it was new.

sorry i had not posted sooner. i have no internet and am syphoning it from a friend.

Stormwalker · Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 7:34 am Post subject:

That's a pretty cool story, Shoobie. Cool

It had just the right combination of suspense and "blowing sh!t up" that I like... Smile

(Yeah, that was the right place to post a short story - furs must have just missed it. *shrug*)

Thanks for posting.

Lindsay