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Shirh Khan Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jul 2001 Posts: 332 Location: In transition/between states
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 7:40 am Post subject: Transitions |
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If you haven't read Transitions yet, then I would highly recommend it.
This is a story with a lot of potential, and is very likely better than my own, in lots of ways. It grabs at you, nearly as well as the best of us can pull ones emotions and viseral mentality, and you'll feel rather compelled to read until you reach the end- then, of course, to wonder where the rest is!
I won't ruin the experience for you by blabbing about what you'll read, I'll just insist that you do.
In a word, it's a damned good read!
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Shadu Registered User
Joined: 21 May 2003 Posts: 336 Location: Barranquilla
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 8:10 am Post subject: |
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I agree 100% i am eagerly waiting for the next chaper(s). its a must read by my book. _________________ __________________
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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 9:07 am Post subject: |
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I wonder what her first production will be....
_________________ "My name's Lion, Anthony Lion"
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 1:06 pm Post subject: |
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I don't know how else to say this except to say thank you. These first comments are very heartwarming and I am deeply, deeply grateful for them, and that you've taken the time to read this.
As the raccoon tells you, I'm working on getting my own site up and running, but you see...while I enjoy writing, computer programming freaks me out six ways from sunday, and until a few days ago I didn't know what an FTP program was, and it's still mostly Russian to me. Ergo, I have to take this one step at a time and rely heavily on good friends to assist me in getting it running. Otherwise I'd be toast.
Once again, thank you! |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 2:40 pm Post subject: |
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I only managed to read the first two chapters before dinner interrupted me but I like what I read.
A few questions rose in my mind, but I am not going to dive into that department right now. Maybe they will be answered in the next chapters and I don't want to make myself even more a fool than I already am.
As I said, a most enjoyable read so far. I'll get to the next chapters as soon as I can. _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 5:33 pm Post subject: |
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Nevermind that, I read the other 4 chapters too and what can I said, quite a good story so far. Interesting characters with an equally interesting plot and a partially familliar setting that helps getting into the story.
I won't go into details right now because I don't want to spoil it for others who have not yet read it. Sufficient to say that the story kept me going until I reached the (current) end. I am curious to see how it will go on. _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 3:36 am Post subject: |
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Really good story, good and believable characters. And I liked how you wove ideas from the comic into the story. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 7:28 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you, Nameless.
Well, as you can see, my page is now up and running and more chapters will hopefully get posted tonight. So far, I have 59 done, but I'm depending on others to actually do the posting and such. With any luck, up to chapter 11 should be up tonight though. |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 9:25 pm Post subject: |
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If you want some advice, don't give away too much too quickly. Otherwise the readers will be overwhelmed with the amount of story. If you post the story chapter by chapter people can read them, digest them and with a little luck comment and discuss them. If you post too much that gets tricky because so much happens. _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Shadu Registered User
Joined: 21 May 2003 Posts: 336 Location: Barranquilla
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 10:20 pm Post subject: |
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im just glad to know this story will probably be with us for a while. i don't mind waiting for posts as long as its long, i like long. _________________ __________________
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 4:37 am Post subject: |
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Thank you for your suggestion. I will make sure to post them a little by little.
I just want to get some of the chapters up so people have at least a LITTLE to get started on. But after this I'll post one or two at a time, as per your suggestion.
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 5:32 am Post subject: |
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(Up to Ch. 6)
Gabby has only been there for one day, but there is one thing they could do even if the results from the medical examination don't come quickly:
A photo session.
She doesn't have to get into contact with anybody (not intimate contact at any rate), they'll get some pretty pictures for Zig's website and it will give Zig a chance to see how Gabby handles herself.
Now to wait for the next chapter. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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elMaxx Administrator
Joined: 01 Dec 2000 Posts: 1127 Location: Land of Mud
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 4:55 pm Post subject: |
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Posted chapters 1 thru 11... enjoy! _________________ [Citation Needed] |
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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 7:00 pm Post subject: |
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AAARGH!!!!
Did you have to post so many chapters?
It's three minutes till midnight, and I had planned to go to bed early for once...
Hmm....
Speedy Gonzales seems to have earned that nickname for a lot of reasons... _________________ "My name's Lion, Anthony Lion"
A fur with a license to purr...
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Shadu Registered User
Joined: 21 May 2003 Posts: 336 Location: Barranquilla
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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Read the posted chapters and well...
WOW!!
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